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you were the one that told me
everything was going to be alright.

you were the one that kissed my arms
and held me in the night.

you were the one that helped me
when i might have cut too deep.

you were my knight in shinning armour
who held me in my sleep.

but now you have left
like all good knights do.

so now i am the one that says
everything will be alright.

now i am the one that kisses my arms
and holds myself in the night.

now i am the one that helps
when i might have cut too deep.

they think im just fine
they think i can do it by myself
but all i can think of of is
where are you now, when nothing is right
where are you now, when im alone in the night
where are you now, when i cut too deep
where is my knight that would protect me in my sleep?
©2004-2009 ~frozenteardrops
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i started writing this about someone else i knew and then slowly twisted it more into the direction of being focused to the general public.

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:iconladiefox:
Izzy ... I ... I LOVE it! It gave me that sensation of wanting to cry (but I didn't). Very intense and sad and strong and ... I think for the me the saddest part is knowing that I never had that knight in shining armor. Well, you came close, but really, I never had one.
:iconfrozenteardrops:
yay. (not that u didnt have one...but yay for liking it). it was about my friend originally. but then i was like..wait. this applies now to three people i know including myself...then it grew and grew and grew. lol. one thing that scares me tho...is that i put that up last night and already today you have commented on it. haha ur always on arent you. lol. i am coming up soon. lol. we are gonna get egged, no? hah! O: )
:iconfrozenteardrops:
oh wow. u gave me a favorite? thankyou!! thats so awesome. lol....
:iconladiefox:
lol! i brought the idea of you coming up with my parents and they want juliet to come up too ... so I am trying to figure it out ... hmmers. oh, and the poem I wrote, ur poem inspired me. so thank you
:iconfrozenteardrops:
if juliet comes up...that will be very hard to get egged. very hard. we would have to wait until she was 100 percent asleep and like...then we couldnt sit in ur room and do it..oh wait..the porch? no too scary..we will think of something goddamnit!!
:iconsilentdreamer12:
what a peice very cool:)
:iconfrozenteardrops:
thanks!

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such a fool for the amazon
:iconescher-remix:
this is a very powerful piece (its great!) ^_-, you can percieve a lot of emotions when reading this piece.... very moving and very beautiful!
:iconfrozenteardrops:
thanks... : )

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such a fool for the amazon

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